English
For English this quarter we had a novel study. We read a book called Banner in the Sky. The novel is about a boy named Rudi who has a dream to hike the mightiest mountain all of Switzerland, however Rudi encounters obstacles during his journey. The tale explains how Rudi matures from a boy to a man. After reading the book, the assignment was to determine a theme and create a story from the theme. Below is the attachment of the story and the score I received.
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Reflection
The mark which I received from this essay is actually considered great because it's the first time for me to get this mark on a essay within grade 9. Well I have only done 2 essays including this one, previously I received 7 and a 8. So I guess it is slightly better. However the maximum mark is still 10, I still have work to do. I still have to work harder until I can reach that score, so i can be a better student. And that is exactly what I will do to improve, i will read more and study the vocabulary more in order to get that 10.
This essay that I made can be connected with the AOI Human Inguinity because the book we read about was very creative and full of innovation. The book can be related to lots of things, therefore we learned how the author thought creatively when he wrote the novel. For the second part of the AOI, after reading the book I evaluated parts of the book and how the book was writen to understand the book further. For the last part of the AOI, after I read the book and understand it, the task was to create a story. THerefore I explore and have the desire to create or develop something new after reading the novel. This means I completed awareness understanding too because I was able to understand the book and creatively make something new.
The mark which I received from this essay is actually considered great because it's the first time for me to get this mark on a essay within grade 9. Well I have only done 2 essays including this one, previously I received 7 and a 8. So I guess it is slightly better. However the maximum mark is still 10, I still have work to do. I still have to work harder until I can reach that score, so i can be a better student. And that is exactly what I will do to improve, i will read more and study the vocabulary more in order to get that 10.
This essay that I made can be connected with the AOI Human Inguinity because the book we read about was very creative and full of innovation. The book can be related to lots of things, therefore we learned how the author thought creatively when he wrote the novel. For the second part of the AOI, after reading the book I evaluated parts of the book and how the book was writen to understand the book further. For the last part of the AOI, after I read the book and understand it, the task was to create a story. THerefore I explore and have the desire to create or develop something new after reading the novel. This means I completed awareness understanding too because I was able to understand the book and creatively make something new.