English
For English this quarter we had another novel study. We read this novel called Animal Farm. It was a very interesting book retelling the Russian Revolution through animals in a farm. The task below is a creativing writing on one of the events from the novel. It also has my grade.
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Reflection
Writing the essay was quite difficult because I had to retell a event from the novel in one of the character's point of view. If you have read the essay, you will know what it looks like and how I have written it. The file above also tells me how to improve. Teacher said that I should have been more careful with the quotes, I reworded some of the quotes and should have put them in brackets instead of quotation marks. That was one error. There were also some grammar issues, I had wrong tenses but the teacher said it didn't really effect my grade. My biggest flaw would be using quotes that weren't really useful, like it was unnecessary. I could have used different quotes that would have given me a better score. These are what I have to put in mind in the future to have a better scores when it comes to creative writing.
This essay is quite difficult to be connected with the AOI health and social education. It doesn't really have much connection with health because it's writing a essay from a novel study. But I guess it can be connected with social education because my english class is a society. In our class we tend to know each other's strength and weaknesses. We know those who are talented with orals and those who do well with written work. Knowing this, our action would be to help other's weaknesses with our strengths. I have seen this in the class because students and teachers communicate to improve their work. In the end we all reflect on our abilities to shape a better society.
Writing the essay was quite difficult because I had to retell a event from the novel in one of the character's point of view. If you have read the essay, you will know what it looks like and how I have written it. The file above also tells me how to improve. Teacher said that I should have been more careful with the quotes, I reworded some of the quotes and should have put them in brackets instead of quotation marks. That was one error. There were also some grammar issues, I had wrong tenses but the teacher said it didn't really effect my grade. My biggest flaw would be using quotes that weren't really useful, like it was unnecessary. I could have used different quotes that would have given me a better score. These are what I have to put in mind in the future to have a better scores when it comes to creative writing.
This essay is quite difficult to be connected with the AOI health and social education. It doesn't really have much connection with health because it's writing a essay from a novel study. But I guess it can be connected with social education because my english class is a society. In our class we tend to know each other's strength and weaknesses. We know those who are talented with orals and those who do well with written work. Knowing this, our action would be to help other's weaknesses with our strengths. I have seen this in the class because students and teachers communicate to improve their work. In the end we all reflect on our abilities to shape a better society.